Funny, but your rapping sucks.
The song was funny, ill admit that. The beat was ok. But you cant rap for shit. At least you could write some rhymes without ding dong ooh ooh ting tang in them. But hey theres always room for improvement. Im not hatin just giving constructive criticism.
hahah, thanks man, i'll tell yah what you already know, i am no rapper, but all be damned if it's not fun to pretend to be able to rap. just look at eminem, he knows whats up ;)
wow!
this stuff is great. im surprised you dont have a record deal or something. im also a musician and your stuff just blows me away. very nice keep up the good work. i wish you much success with your music.
Bad recording
The song was ok. The recording was really bad quality. Oh, and if youre serious about being in a band i wouldent release your songs on NG because you get no copyrights and people might steal your music. Its your choice though. Maybe you dont care. I personally wouldent release my bands stuff on NG, id go to soundclick or MP3.com because they give you copyrights.
Dashboard wannabe?
I think the song was ok. The lyrics were mediocre. The guitar playing was kind of sloppy. I think you were trying too much to sound like someone else. But it was a good effort. Practice some more and release another track down the line.
Started as LiveLoveDieCT. Became MC Revenant
Age 39, Male
None at the moment
Oak Creek High Graduate
Milwaukee, WI
Joined on 11/2/03
Northwest Gangsta (sex) 
