The misspelled words and too many fucks.
The story was ok and the graphics were ok. The thing that made it not look professional was the spelling errors, and too much use of the f word when it wasnt needed. it sounded stupid because it was used so much. overall a half way decent movie, but more time spent could have made it alot better. I think it would be worthy of a spot on NG if the author would have took his time.